I loved
today.
I loved the
simmering summer
And the
sweat,
I loved the
stink
And the
shirt sticking to me,
Being wet.
I loved
walking through the market,
People hurling
abuses
And fighting
with fists,
I loved all
the excuses
That maid
gave me,
About the
leaves she took.
I loved the
power cut
And staring at the fan,
I loved
being chased by the stray dogs
And into a
dark alley I ran,
And there I
met these eunuchs
Who hassled
me, bullied me
For my
money
But I
smiled and gave them all,
Then a bird
shat in my tea,
While I was
standing next to a roadside stall.
In the
evening, mom called
She scolded
me for being late
But I didn’t
wince,
or cursed my fate,
Later, I had a
fight with my friends,
and now I have a
bloodied nose
But that's okay,
I suppose.
And this is
something new,
I guess it’s 'cause,
Today I
dreamt about you.
I love the imagery...the words of the poem flow in the mind like a movie scene . And the length of the poem , from the p.o.v of the ending seems perfect-niether abrupt nor too long :)
ReplyDeleteAlmost visualized!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written. :)
I loved the way, you loved today. :)
ReplyDeleteA very beautiful way of expressing the dream! :)
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